FFFC #149 - Dangerous Today

[Alex]

I'm dangerous today,
like a loaded gun,
in the hands of a madman
whose just out having fun,
but I know this is no game,
'cause there are no rules to play by,
and I've misplaced some pieces
while I've gained spaces through lies.
So please don't trust in me,
because I'm dangerous,
you see.

[dorian hanes]

Should it be "who'se?

I enjoyed the simplicity of ur rhyme

[Alex]

Thank You, I edited that.

[Lubesh]

Very good as a whole, but some highly original, enjoyable bts...

and I've misplaced some pieces
while I've gained spaces through lies.

[Alex]

Thank You.